I do see that they sense something is missing, and if I could figure out what this was, or even have a few more clues dropped my way, I'd change it,
As I said somewhere I did rewrite huge chunks of it for one agent - and the reader there loved it, only for the MD to say no in the final moment (practically as pen was touching contract). I've since heard that particular agency has decided to drop their fantasy section - so I'm left wondering if that was it. Or not...
I am fast coming to the conclusion that there must be something deeply wrong with me, because not only do I keep writing the things I would like to read, but I keep trying to get an agent too. Still, the alternatives don't bear contemplation. :)
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Date: 2004-11-20 08:00 am (UTC)As I said somewhere I did rewrite huge chunks of it for one agent - and the reader there loved it, only for the MD to say no in the final moment (practically as pen was touching contract). I've since heard that particular agency has decided to drop their fantasy section - so I'm left wondering if that was it. Or not...
I am fast coming to the conclusion that there must be something deeply wrong with me, because not only do I keep writing the things I would like to read, but I keep trying to get an agent too. Still, the alternatives don't bear contemplation. :)