"Two things had to be real, to give the ending its shape: one, the sense of loss and the pervasive sense of grief, and two, the desire to transcend that. You have to have something to transcend"
Oh! You've just encompassed the whole reason why the last act in my book doesn't work. And now I know how to fix it! Thank you.
I absolutely love it when something I say is useful in this particular fashion. It doesn't happen often, but thanks for pointing it out.
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Date: 2004-12-01 04:49 am (UTC)Oh! You've just encompassed the whole reason why the last act in my book doesn't work. And now I know how to fix it! Thank you.
I absolutely love it when something I say is useful in this particular fashion. It doesn't happen often, but thanks for pointing it out.