This is fascinating. I was just beginning to think about who to ask for feedback once I am (finally) satisfied that I have told a relatively coherent story (without bits that vanish in the middle, which is somehow still managing to happen. Ahem).
I asked my father the other day if he would read it and he said "Is this like asking me to critique your first born child?", which is a fairly accurate way of putting it (except, unlike story, first born perfect in every way, so no critique necessary).
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Date: 2008-05-27 12:33 pm (UTC)I asked my father the other day if he would read it and he said "Is this like asking me to critique your first born child?", which is a fairly accurate way of putting it (except, unlike story, first born perfect in every way, so no critique necessary).