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Elsewhere on LJ a question came up. It's one that I've thought about a lot over the past years (unlike, say, http protocol, but I digress). How fast can one write? How fast should one write? The answer to this question is about as varied as the answer to the question "How do you write a novel?" as applied to novelists.

And, as LJ seems intent on not actually letting me post anything like a reply to any of the comments, I thought I'd answer with a couple of versions, which are all, oddly enough, mine.


I had worked in bookstores for 9 years when I started writing my first novel. I understood two things: One, that cover was important and two, that timing was important. I had no say in the cover, and my instant response to it was a buyer response. Which is to say, I looked at it, and I knew I'd order lower on the title because of the cover. The whole "don't judge a book by its cover" thing? Not, sadly, true. It's not fair to the book inside, but the cover -- as I've said elsewhere -- is what will attract most people who are standing and staring at a bunch of books, many of which they know nothing about. If you've established a name for yourself, it's not as important, but if you haven't -- and this was my first book -- it's important.

So, I had no say in the cover, and didn't love it. I did have some say in the timing of the books, or rather, the publishing interval between the novels, and the say was entirely in the writing. I wanted the books to come out six months apart. Why? Because at six months, the new book could in theory keep the backlist alive, and at six months, I had some chance of gaining some name recognition. Not so much by sales, but just by the actual familiarity of the name itself. My then-agent agreed with this very strongly. And the first two books did come out six months apart. The third, however, came out a year after the second. Why?

Because I had to throw it out and start it over again. I had it finished, but it wasn't good. The agent thought it wasn't bad, but in my opinion, what it needed in order to work was a complete rewrite -- and that would take it out of the December slot, and push it ahead to the whenever slot. I could have done what I consider band-aid work, but it would have tormented me endlessly, because by that time I realized that the book would be out there with my name on it, and all errors, all infelicities, would be static. So I lost the slot, and rewrote the book.

The fourth book came out about a year after the third.

The fifth novel was sold to Del Rey when the third novel went out of print; the third novel was out of print just as the fourth novel was being published. It wasn't reprinted, and this -- although being out of print was a fact of life -- drove me crazy. In the end, we pulled the book and sold it to DAW instead, and that book was HUNTER'S OATH. I have never managed to make a six month interval since the first two books, with the exception of RIVEN SHIELD/SUN SWORD, and that, largely because the book was split (1132 manuscript pages for the first 'half', and 1648 for the second, and yes, I realize those are way, way too long).

A year per book was still considered acceptable, and I managed that until SEA OF SORROWS, which was published two years after SHINING COURT. That two year gap almost gave me ulcers. The two year gap between SoS and RS also gave me hives. Why?

Because the frontlist does drive the backlist. You can watch it in your royalty statements; every time a new book is published, the backlist numbers go up. They go up for the period in which the book was published, because people order the first books in the series to coincide with the release of the new one. After that, they dwindle again. The longer between new books, the lower the numbers go, and it doesn't matter who you are as a writer, or what level of sales you've achieved; this is almost always true.

To keep a book in print when it's not a bestseller is tricky enough. When a new book is coming, it's much easier to justify the warehouse work; when it isn't, and you're not entirely sure when the new one is going to be published, it's harder. No, you don't have any say in this. I don't, either. Writing a long series that's a midlist series, when there are gaps between books that are greater than a year becomes trickier in other ways as well. Demand can change, reading tastes can change, the early books can become unavailable, and if they can't be found, there's no momentum and no incentive for the sales force to push the next one. If the books sell steadily, and the series is long, it also delays things like hardcover publication, if the series started as a paperback series. When I started publishing with DAW, DAW was publishing maybe two hardcovers a year; they're now publishing one a month (or more). Because, as I've mentioned, the industry does constantly evolve.

So. For purely practical, career and business reasons, it's best to have a gap of no more than one year between books; if you're starting out in paperback, six months is ideal. If you're not writing a series, the answer to this is different. I haven't told a single book story in my career, so much of my commentary is based on series. If you've got eight books written, publishing them at a faster rate is sometimes a bit tricky because readers have odd reactions to books when they know very little about the publication or writing process; they'll think you wrote them in two months, and there is a strong reader sense that speed of writing and quality of work are inversely proportional. So in that case, I'd still recommend six months.

How much can I write? In a given month, I expect to be able to write 80-100 novel pages a month; I don't have to pace myself for short pieces because if I can do them at all, it doesn't matter if I do them and burn out on that story because, well, it's done. This would, in theory, be a book a year, and not a short book either. But there are months when the writing is tossed to one side for any number of real life reasons, and there are months when the writing is tossed to the side because face it, it just sucks, and in the end? The answer isn't as clear. RIVEN SHIELD and SUN SWORD were actually faster than earlier novels because they were the last one(s) and endings for me are always clearer; I've pushed the stone up the hill, and it's careening down at a speed I can barely keep up with. To continue with this analogy, it doesn't meant that it doesn't hit bumps, that it doesn't veer, that it doesn't become something entirely different -- it just means that the story has killer momentum for me.

Knowing the ideal, why is it that I, with bookstore experience and a sense of the business, had these two year gaps? Life. And the books themselves. At some point -- at least for me -- I had to make a choice. Everything the head knew, the heart couldn't always follow. I found writing harder with later books than I had with the early ones. Partly, this is because I knew more about writing, and had a much more bitchy internal editor. I don't think this is likely to change, though. Hard doesn't matter, if you can still make deadlines. Which, demonstrably, I stalled on.

If I continue to work at my current pace, there's some chance that I'll finish HOUSE WAR by the end of this year. Which means publication sometime in 2005. Or, about two years after SUN SWORD. This is in part because I started BLACK GAUNTLET first, and then couldn't finish it without writing HOUSE WAR -- for my own internal sense of the universe as an organic place, where things could happen, and the story grow in any direction as a response to events that were taking place.

I thought I could do this; I couldn't. This is part of the learning process (at least mine; I think I had an enormous arrogance, or if we're being kind, self-confidence about things I could do when I was younger, and all of learning has been the humbling and enlightening process of realiziing that there are some things that are just too costly in too many ways for me to be able to do. It's particularly important that everyone realize that the me in this case is, well me <wry g> I'm sure that we all gain experience in as varied a way as we write, and not all of us need to jam our hands into the fire to figure out the whole burning thing. Digressing. Everyone act surprised <g>. In 1986, I could have done this. I could have finished BG, but I think it would have gutted HW. When all things are equal, it makes sense to go with a sound business model; when all things aren't equal, it makes sense to go with the book. To me. But that's probably because it's the only way I've found, with experience, I can go.

Because as it gets harder, I've found that I really have to finish the story that I'm working on now; that my heart has to be right there, up front, and without distractions and anxiety, inasmuch as that's possible. I could have started something entirely different; that wouldn't hurt or change my sense of continuity. There are whole worlds I look forward to writing about. But they aren't now, and as someone else said elsewhere, the only way to get there from here is to finish the books I need to write now.

Date: 2004-08-25 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrissa.livejournal.com
If anything could make me glad to not have published a novel yet, I think it's the ability to get "ahead" a little.

Not that I'm very glad. But still.

Do you think the ideal publication schedule is the same for children's or YA as it is for adult?

Date: 2004-08-25 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msagara.livejournal.com
Do you think the ideal publication schedule is the same for children's or YA as it is for adult?

No, I don't. I think that -- and again I realize this has nothing to do with reality -- readers -don't- equate YA novel publication speed with quality. So I think that more frequent publication than the 6 month schedule would be okay -- but really, I can only say this on the basis of a genre selection of middle-readers and YA novels in our store over the years, and it's small compared to the rest of the store (we'd like it to grow; we're so pressed for space now, it's not funny.)

However, I'm not a YA writer (one novella to date), and I don't really understand the YA market in any way from that perspective, as it's almost, but not entirely, different in some of the ways it plays out.

[livejournal.com profile] sartorias has more experience with that, and maybe has a better grounded opinion.

Date: 2004-08-25 08:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janni.livejournal.com
My perception--and others reading here will have far more informed takes--is that for YA and middle grade, it depends on whether your book is a paperback series book--once a month is not too frequent for these, and every couple months pretty common; or a hardcover standalone book--in which case less often than once a year isn't out of line.

Date: 2004-08-25 09:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sartorias.livejournal.com
Judging from the frequency of many series, etc, publication at a fast clip is a plus...if kids get turned on by an author, they want everything by that author. (Which is, of course, why I am so frustrated...I ahve all these books written, I have one that took off like a rocket--but no one will publish any of the others. Argh!)

Date: 2004-08-25 10:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] domynoe.livejournal.com
Oh, man, that sucks! And is my personal nightmare. I'm afraid I'll get one novel sold and that will be it for the rest of my life.

What we torture purselves with. Like I don't have enough to worry about as is. *rolls eyes*

Date: 2004-08-25 11:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msagara.livejournal.com
Can I ask -- although it's off topic, if anything can be in one's own LJ -- about a couple of things, then?

1. Which would that one be? I assume it's the first Wren novel?

2. If so, what about Crown Duel & Court Duel (I have the harcourt hcs, and I loved those books; they're comfort reads)? Were they not specifically yours, or do they not count as a taking-off? (I kind of count them because even if they were Rowling, they did sell, they've been reprinted in that lovely firebird single volume)

3. The DAW books? Not yet written, or not yet envisioned?

4. Actually, you've mentioned elsewhere that you have a LOT of notebooks of stories, and I'm also curious to know how many of those are complete, in a finished sense, and how many of them will grow into background, etc., for novels later?

Date: 2004-08-25 11:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sartorias.livejournal.com
The Wren novels were first sold in 1990, and written in high school as a compromise between what I thought "they" would publish and what I wanted to read.

CD was an experiment, one of the very minor ones in the long series that I typed up and sent out for the heck of it. It did well--but Jane Yolen Books was axed by Harcourt, because they wanted to sell the company and the bean counters wanted the entire list except their top three sellers gone. Gone we were, although I was told I was number four.

Seque up a few years, Firebirds brings it out, and it's their biggest best seller. But nothing else happens. I have three other novels polished and ready to go, that are entries to that world, though not related to CD (which is a tiny part of the main story line about very minor characters); and they are going nowhere.

I want to publish them on my own, while the readership is there, but no cash. (Be a cool experiment, what?).

The Daw one is an adult entry novel into that world, and the first one is written, just waiting for Daw to read it and give it a pub date. Oh God I wish it would be soon and not ten years from now.

As for finished and ready to go, I'd say 11 of them are in that state, and another dozen in various states of type-up, rewrite. Notes for the rest. (Converting all the handwriting to typing is an enormous project, and goes very slowly due to demands of dayjob and these other book deals I take on to pay bills.)

Date: 2004-08-25 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msagara.livejournal.com
The Daw one is an adult entry novel into that world, and the first one is written, just waiting for Daw to read it and give it a pub date. Oh God I wish it would be soon and not ten years from now.

I'm sure it won't be ten years from now <g>. Welcome aboard the ship, btw -- now I really wish you were coming to Boston, 'cause I'd get a chance to meet you for certain there.

As for finished and ready to go, I'd say 11 of them are in that state, and another dozen in various states of type-up, rewrite. Notes for the rest. (Converting all the handwriting to typing is an enormous project, and goes very slowly due to demands of dayjob and these other book deals I take on to pay bills.)

Are 11 YAs, then? Ummm -- this is probably either email or a MYOB (well, mind MY own business) -- but who is your agent, out of curiosity?

Date: 2004-08-25 01:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sartorias.livejournal.com
Nobody has seen the 11 yet, but they are all over the map as far as YA/adult, length, etc are concerned...one more reason to wish POD tech was here, now!

Date: 2004-08-25 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msagara.livejournal.com
I'm stupid <rueful g>. By nobody, do you mean no readers, no agent, or no publisher? Given the Wren books, and the Duel book(s), I'm assuming you mean no readers -- but if you mean no one, isn't POD very premature?

I know saying "You're a damn good writer" doesn't help much, because publishing is what it is and that's no guarantee -- but you are, and also accessible, and I think POD, if I understood you correctly -- would be at the bottom of my list if I were agenting you.

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Date: 2004-08-25 01:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sartorias.livejournal.com
PS I would love to meet...any chance you are going to WFC? I hope to, if disaster doesn't strike.

Date: 2004-08-25 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msagara.livejournal.com
PS I would love to meet...any chance you are going to WFC? I hope to, if disaster doesn't strike.

Unless some hideous disaster strikes (and I'm now knocking wood with my head), I'm supposed to be there and rooming with [livejournal.com profile] aireon. I don't think DAW has made final decisions about whether or not they're sending anyone to Tempe this year, which is too bad, because I think more of us will be in Tempe than Boston <wry g>.

oh -- just as a btw: I spell DAW all caps because Elsie Wolheim once called our bookstore to, ummm, let us all know how incredibly disrespectful we had been in the use of her husband's initials when we sent out one of our newsletters which cited a "Daw" title. I can still remember it, and I did a lot of grovelling. Minutes of it.

And perhaps because it was Elsie, and perhaps because I'm hardened in my habits, I still type it in all caps. I could have pointed out -- as I would have to anyone else, but never Elsie <wry g> -- that it makes sense to assume Daw as opposed to DAW because it was distributed at the time by Penguin USA, most of whose other lines have bird related names (Roc, Firebird, Penguin, Puffin, etc.), but there you have it.

Just in case anyone else wonders if my caps key is stuck <wry g>.

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Date: 2004-08-25 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schulman.livejournal.com
I want to publish them on my own, while the readership is there, but no cash. (Be a cool experiment, what?).

Not that it's any of my business, but have you approached Meisha Merlin? They've carved out a nice niche publishing novels that are in deep demand within fandom but not broad demand outside of it (Miller and Lee, Hodgell, Killough, etc.).

I could go on for paragraphs about my love for Meisha Merlin and how they're filling the needs of an underserved market segment (i.e., me) instead of going after the lowest common denominator (i.e., people who do not share my refined tastes), but I won't, because it would be boring and fangirlish. But I will point out that devoted fans of P.C. Hodgell laugh bitterly at any gap between novels during which you don't have to renew your driver's license a few times.

Date: 2004-08-25 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msagara.livejournal.com
But I will point out that devoted fans of P.C. Hodgell laugh bitterly at any gap between novels during which you don't have to renew your driver's license a few times.

That one, I could have cried for, as a bookseller :/. I know that she decided to finish her phD, and put the Jaime books on hold -- but the first two had some momentum and some real reader interest behind them, and I think, had she chosen to do the novel and the phD in the reverse order, it would have turned out differently :/. Sometimes, timing sucks, but it does count.

I will say, though, that while Meisha Merlin is filling a niche market at the moment, some discussion with Kevin Murphy at the BEC (which, to show my age, I originally typed as CBA - Canadian Booksellers Association, the Canadian equivalent of what used to be called the ABA, but I'm digressing) indicated that they were beginning to rethink their business model. A number of authors -- like Janny Wurts, and I think Mike Resnick -- have come to them recently with original novels, and along with the success of Miller & Lee, this could put them on the edge of more pronounced visibility.

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Date: 2004-08-26 05:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sartorias.livejournal.com
I remember talking to Pat Hodgell about her situation--which disgusted me enormously as I was waiting and waiting for her hext!

I do like MM very much--but I suspect they are being bombarded by people, just as are regular publishers. If I get a chance to meet and talk with one at WFC, if I get to go, I will check it out!

Date: 2004-08-25 10:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] braider.livejournal.com
Speaking of children's books.... When I was small, my older sister wrote and drew books for me. I seem to remember hearing that you shouldn't send in art with a book, but the artwork is an integral part of these stories. Do children's books work differently? I'm encouraging her to try to get these published - if I still remember them they had to have been fairly good (we'll find out when I try re-reading them....) Do you have any "how to publish children's books" resources to recommend?

Date: 2004-08-25 10:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msagara.livejournal.com
I don't have any information on children's books. I -do- know that you still do not send art with them. If you're the artist, you submit a portfolio of your work to the art-director. If you're a writer, you submit your writing to the editor (generally through an agent these days). If you're both? Not as sure.

[livejournal.com profile] ohiblather used to have links to various writing resources, one of which was for kids, and I think if you follow her LJ stuff back to her blog, there's a sidebar that goes to the writing/freelance related stuff which in turn then opens up to other web-resources <g>.

Date: 2004-08-25 11:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] braider.livejournal.com
Thanks! I ended up using one of those many links-from-links the other night to submit some poetry. Need to explore the links more thoroughly, now that I know they're there.

Date: 2004-08-25 04:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janni.livejournal.com
You can send art with a book, but it's usually better not to. When you send art and the book, both have to be extraordinary enough to spur the publisher to want to buy it, which will lead many books that might be accepted on the basis of their prose to be rejected.

And artists generally have a better sense of how to add to an already strong book than a writer might think. They're professionals, too, and for a picture book, collaborators as well. When creating picture books, the story really is only half the writer's.

But from what I've seen (I've only had short stories and older book covers illustrated, which is a very different thing), it's a lot of fun, when it works, to see what happens when the artist's vision is added to one's own.

Thinking about it, all of the writer/illustrators I've known have been illustrators first, writers second. Unless your sister is as good or better an illustrator than writer, I'd recommend just sending out the stories.

And yes, I realize this means writing picture books is very much not for anyone who needs full control over the resulting work. I find the thought of collaborating with an illustrator exciting, but have talked to a lot of folks who find the idea a bit uneasy-making.

Date: 2004-08-25 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] braider.livejournal.com
It's not amazing art, but her character drawings are very expressive, and tell part of the story without words. Significant glances, etc.

It occurs to me that what it actually is is a comic book for very young children - say, 1-2 grade.

Does this change anything from what you said above?

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Kids' books...

Date: 2004-08-25 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artbeco.livejournal.com
May I recommend http://www.scbwi.com/ as a great resource? The organization is very supportive and has much info on all these types of questions re children's books. I went to their annual conference a couple of weeks ago, and it really provided a brain-flood of info...

Re: Kids' books...

Date: 2004-08-25 04:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janni.livejournal.com
Seconding the recommendation to check out SCBWI. Most of the local chapters have good events, too.

Date: 2004-08-25 10:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauramc.livejournal.com
I think some of the answer would depend on what kind of house you end up with. Do they aim mostly for the bookstore or the school and library market? Are their novel bestsellers books that win big awards or books that sell well in bookstores but don't win any awards? I can think of several examples of writers - Susan Cooper, Franny Billingsley, Ursula Le Guin to name a few - who have what people would call successful careers. However, Billingsley's last book was released four years ago. Cooper especially but also Le Guin don't always have a MG or YA book released each year.

Date: 2004-08-25 10:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauramc.livejournal.com
ergh - and apologies for grammar errors in that post!

Date: 2004-08-25 11:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msagara.livejournal.com
No one is doing to ding you for grammar in anything that isn't a flame. Which is to say, if you're flaming about things, it's much more likely that someone will nitpick grammar; otherwise, we all sift for content and assume typos <g>.

Well, okay, that's what I assume.

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