msagara: (mms)
[personal profile] msagara
Something [livejournal.com profile] sartorias is discussing made me think of something vis a vis writing and process. I started to post this in response to her comment about narrator and voice, and then realized that it was a digression, and off topic. So I'm posting it here.

I find process discussions fascinating precisely because no two writers I've ever met have the same process, although there's overlap.


Susan Musgrave once came to one of my University classes as a guest lecturer. She spoke, of course, about her own writing processes, and her own approach to poetry, and (this is paraphrased, because I don't have eidetic memory) she said if the -initial- attempt to write something didn't work with a minimal amount of editing, she threw it away. All of the power, in her opinion and at that time was in the initial rush to paper, and losing that in heavy revision killed the poem, for her.

I often find that that's how I approach novels/novel chapters or sections. I've thrown away as much as 600 pages before, to start over, rather than revise heavily, once I've realized what the issues are. It's not that I think all 600 pages are -- or were -- garbage; it's just that the revisions would have been so surgical it would have been more an act of vivisection than an act of organic creation.

Okay, that sounded pretentious. I'll stop now.

Well, almost. I started to wonder, in the discussion about voice, whether or not dissection & understanding of a particular style can be subsumed into one's own process and made part of it -- especially for people who tend to write with a more heavy reliance on the sub-conscious than is probably wise (I include myself in that number).

I know it helps when I review; I know it helps when I critique. I know that I can do this with my work much after the fact, when I've forgotten the initial, blind impulse and emotionality that drove the writing in the first place. But I also know that I live in a jungle, and writing is like hacking a path through dense growth with a machete (I borrowed this analogy from [livejournal.com profile] aireon, who used it to describe the writing of one of my favourite of her books <wry g>.)

Date: 2004-07-14 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msagara.livejournal.com
I mean who cares how many days went by between the last scene and this one?

Um — me? It makes a difference in how I expect characters to react if they've had two weeks to come to terms with what just happened, or it's later that day.


Ayup. I actually had one person email me with a request for my calendar, which hasn't ever made it into the front matter because, um, there's never been enough room for it. I tend to map out days, and geography is a part of that -- but I hate maps, and mine all look like big blobs with things jutting out of them that are just as blobby.

Otoh, as a reader I don't care. And was told by many editors that that was my perogative as a reader -- but that as a writer, I had to do the work for those readers who did care.

Not, of course, that I hold this against you. Much <g>.

Profile

msagara: (Default)
Michelle Sagara

April 2015

S M T W T F S
   1234
567891011
12131415161718
19202122232425
2627282930  

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jan. 24th, 2026 10:03 am
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios